Thursday, May 23, 2019

Chimpanzees Writing

Last week the Chimpanzees wrote recount stories about their weekends. We have been learning to add more detail to our writing. We wrote about who we were with, where we went and when we did it. Then we wrote about what we did and finished with a feelings sentence. Listen to see if you can hear the different parts of our stories! Here is Gabriel’s story:


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  1. Hi Gabriel. We have some questions about your writing. Why did you go to Robin's house? How much lollies did you have? Did you have any lollipops? From Toby, Olivia, Vincy, Honor, Marco, Zoey, Makoto and Miss Cruz.

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    1. I just wanted to go to Robin's house because he is my friend. I asked my Dad if I could go on my scooter and he said yes. I think I had 5 lollies! I didn't have any lollipops. I had some healthy vegetables and bread when I got home! From Gabriel.

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